WannaScrew's blog post - Blood Stained Carpet

Tuesday, December 30, 2008, 9:17:18 AM
She lays on the blood stained carpet
The blow to her skull paralyzes her
She screams for help, but no one can hear her
She wonders “Will I make it out alive?”
The foot steps draw closer and closer
He comes nearer with a rage unexplainable
He whispers in her ear, “Your a whore how could you betray me?”
“I... Read More’m sorry I love you”, She says, As the final blow hits her.
With her eyes glossy and rolled back
The echo of her crushing skull, still piercing in his ears
He Wonders, “what have I done?”
He wraps her body in the blood stained carpet
And buries her body where no one can find her
With grace and beauty she is remembered
With sadness she is forgotten

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Others Have Said: 
green angel on 30-Dec-08 9:21:57
Very evocative and dramatic. I like it
xoxoxox

WannaScrew on 30-Dec-08 9:50:00
line 8
*im sorry i love you*

*sorcha* on 30-Dec-08 12:29:40
this hits close to home for me wanna...a friend of mine was battered just very recently :(

viperwarrior on 20-Jan-09 7:48:08
very powerful and moving, speaks right to a person in the strongest of ways, very well done.

Christöpher on 21-Jan-09 15:17:10
carpets piss me off