seshat's blog post - Poetry

Monday, September 24, 2007, 9:01:29 AM
A cold hand on my forehead
pulls me back to reality

far away my eyes walked
wandered to the sun licked valleys
and blue stone heights
that only I know

flaxen hair hazel eyes
reminiscent of clouds with
golden linings

there’s a world of darkness
kneeling behind them
shivering with memory and premonition

but nevertheless with intangible light
worn, faded into
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locksley on 24-Sep-07 12:50:50
i like it!

lovitt on 24-Sep-07 14:41:06
Nice! I like it..

she bop on 24-Sep-07 20:58:47
I wish I had ANY kind of writing skills...I'd even appreicate bad ones :p I love it and I hope you share more with us :)

Half Cocked on 26-Sep-07 14:03:30
Yep can't wait for the next