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Wednesday, August 12, 2015, 6:52:38 PM
I have no more
Thoughts, ideas
I have no
Words
I can no longer see
The rainbow
No color
Not even black
And white just
Varying shades of gray.
I can no longer hear the music
Play.
My soul is dark
Desolate
Bleak
I have no more
Words
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Others Have Said:
juicy
on 12-Aug-15 20:42:06
Bleak is the word I would use to describe this poem :(
DubbleStrubble on 12-Aug-15 20:42:25
Are you alright?
undisclosedid1
on 12-Aug-15 20:49:08
Tux,
You ok buddy???? Got pull up on that joystick my friend, all indications are your flying way too low right now, let your friends talk you in :( :( :(
amancalledpony
on 12-Aug-15 21:07:17
Deep. Scary too.
Shyguy1976
on 12-Aug-15 22:36:49
*man hugs Tux*
tight_wet_lips
on 12-Aug-15 22:36:52
Definitely written from the heart
Artistic
on 12-Aug-15 22:40:54
goosebumps :/
RoxanneS on 12-Aug-15 23:48:56
I've felt this bleakness. Don't let it go on long. Let us know what we can do to help.
VTCali on 13-Aug-15 16:54:45
This better be just words on paper or screen! If not...hugs for you.
whokens on 14-Aug-15 19:15:30
Hello Tux
LuLusBakery on 15-Aug-15 20:56:36
I have felt it, too. Do we REALLY need to experience the lows to appreciate the highs? Maybe, but I do not like it.
Free2b_again
on 18-Jul-16 7:54:14
What if i put my nose in your armpit again? :P